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 on: 10/14-18:14 
Started by superpsycho - Last post by superpsycho

63k - Admiral's Throne



the Deposed King
Keep it up. I hope to be back at it very soon, now that I can see a whole lot better. I had the font size at 22pts plus and was still having problems even with glasses on. Now I can read 8pts with +1.0 readers even though my right eye is still not fully healed yet. I'm supposed to avoid eye strain for another week, but then I'm hoping to sit down and attempt to do some serious writing. We shall see if I will succeed.   

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 on: 10/13-11:21 
Started by superpsycho - Last post by The Deposed King
I'm sure you'll make good headway just like you always do. I was making progress for a few days then had to rewrite a few paragraphs when I realized I screwed up the physics a little. Got that straightened out but I'm back to fighting for each line. I'm not more than a scene or two until the battle actually starts. Did turn over another manuscript that's nearly done to my son-in-law for a little military editing. He's an Marine vet while I'm ex-Army. The ship based ground troops in the story are ex-marines and have two major engagements in the book; one a boarding action and the other planetary. He's checking it for the proper jargon and technical stuff.


63k - Admiral's Throne



the Deposed King

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 on: 09/26-01:05 
Started by Norm - Last post by superpsycho
Wife and I go in tomorrow for the first of our cataract surgeries. Should be able to see half way decently in the not to distant future.   

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 on: 08/06-11:28 
Started by superpsycho - Last post by superpsycho
I hope so too!

43k - Admiral's Throne



the Deposed King
I'm sure you'll make good headway just like you always do. I was making progress for a few days then had to rewrite a few paragraphs when I realized I screwed up the physics a little. Got that straightened out but I'm back to fighting for each line. I'm not more than a scene or two until the battle actually starts. Did turn over another manuscript that's nearly done to my son-in-law for a little military editing. He's an Marine vet while I'm ex-Army. The ship based ground troops in the story are ex-marines and have two major engagements in the book; one a boarding action and the other planetary. He's checking it for the proper jargon and technical stuff.


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 on: 08/02-00:19 
Started by Norm - Last post by superpsycho
Happy Belated Anniversary!   :apld
Thanks. Glad to see you;re still with us. Been busy I hope, rather than under the weather.

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 on: 08/01-21:11 
Started by Norm - Last post by Sargesatt
Today my wife and I celebrated our 47th wedding anniversary.

Happy Belated Anniversary!   :apld

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 on: 07/31-11:22 
Started by superpsycho - Last post by The Deposed King
Good for you. I expect you'll have this one ground out in no time.

I hope so too!

43k - Admiral's Throne



the Deposed King

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 on: 07/26-23:29 
Started by superpsycho - Last post by superpsycho
40k - Admiral's Throne!  And I'm back in action.




The Deposed King
Good for you. I expect you'll have this one ground out in no time.

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 on: 07/25-19:49 
Started by superpsycho - Last post by The Deposed King
Oh, I'm staying after it alright. I just hope I can keep up with it. Did get a little more writing done working on the lead up to the final battle. Trying to force progress but with little success.

40k - Admiral's Throne!  And I'm back in action.




The Deposed King

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 on: 07/15-11:34 
Started by superpsycho - Last post by superpsycho
That's great to hear.  Staying on top of your sugars is critical.  Keep after it SP.



The Deposed King
Oh, I'm staying after it alright. I just hope I can keep up with it. Did get a little more writing done working on the lead up to the final battle. Trying to force progress but with little success. 

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