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 on: 08/06-11:28 
Started by superpsycho - Last post by superpsycho
I hope so too!

43k - Admiral's Throne



the Deposed King
I'm sure you'll make good headway just like you always do. I ways making progress for a few days then had to rewrite a few paragraphs when I realized I screwed up the physics a little. Got that straightened out but I'm back to fighting for each line. I'm not more than a scene or two until the battle actually starts. Did turn over another manuscript that's nearly done to my son-in-law for a little military editing. He's an Marine vet while I'm ex-Army. The ship based ground troops in the story are marines and have two major engagements in the book; one a boarding action and the other planetary. He's checking it for the proper jargon and technical stuff.


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 on: 08/02-00:19 
Started by Norm - Last post by superpsycho
Happy Belated Anniversary!   :apld
Thanks. Glad to see you;re still with us. Been busy I hope, rather than under the weather.

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 on: 08/01-21:11 
Started by Norm - Last post by Sargesatt
Today my wife and I celebrated our 47th wedding anniversary.

Happy Belated Anniversary!   :apld

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 on: 07/31-11:22 
Started by superpsycho - Last post by The Deposed King
Good for you. I expect you'll have this one ground out in no time.

I hope so too!

43k - Admiral's Throne



the Deposed King

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 on: 07/26-23:29 
Started by superpsycho - Last post by superpsycho
40k - Admiral's Throne!  And I'm back in action.




The Deposed King
Good for you. I expect you'll have this one ground out in no time.

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 on: 07/25-19:49 
Started by superpsycho - Last post by The Deposed King
Oh, I'm staying after it alright. I just hope I can keep up with it. Did get a little more writing done working on the lead up to the final battle. Trying to force progress but with little success.

40k - Admiral's Throne!  And I'm back in action.




The Deposed King

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 on: 07/15-11:34 
Started by superpsycho - Last post by superpsycho
That's great to hear.  Staying on top of your sugars is critical.  Keep after it SP.



The Deposed King
Oh, I'm staying after it alright. I just hope I can keep up with it. Did get a little more writing done working on the lead up to the final battle. Trying to force progress but with little success. 

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 on: 07/11-00:34 
Started by superpsycho - Last post by The Deposed King
New diabetes meds making things better. At least I can eat a somewhat normal meal now. Upping frequency of pain meds doesn't help with my ability to think clearly. I'm hoping the change in diet will help with my energy level. Writing has slowed to a frozen snail's pace but I'm hoping once I get passed the lines I'm working on now things will move faster. I'm hoping once the battle actually begins it will be easier. The cat and mouse hunt is what is taking so long. Laying out the combatants strategy requires me to be able to maintain an over view in my head. Not something that comes easy these days. I'll get there, even if I have to crawl and claw my way quarter inch by quarter inch.

That's great to hear.  Staying on top of your sugars is critical.  Keep after it SP.



The Deposed King

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 on: 07/03-00:59 
Started by superpsycho - Last post by superpsycho
Getting close to the big battle at the end where one lonely ranger ship fights three much heavier and better armed war ships. The big thing I still haven't decided is which of our heroes gets critically injured; our main character or his delectable but dangerous partner? Right now I'm leaning towards the main character.

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 on: 06/29-14:01 
Started by superpsycho - Last post by superpsycho
How are the meds going?


The Deposed King
New diabetes meds making things better. At least I can eat a somewhat normal meal now. Upping frequency of pain meds doesn't help with my ability to think clearly. I'm hoping the change in diet will help with my energy level. Writing has slowed to a frozen snail's pace but I'm hoping once I get passed the lines I'm working on now things will move faster. I'm hoping once the battle actually begins it will be easier. The cat and mouse hunt is what is taking so long. Laying out the combatants strategy requires me to be able to maintain an over view in my head. Not something that comes easy these days. I'll get there, even if I have to crawl and claw my way quarter inch by quarter inch.


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